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Title:The boy & the girl at the lake  

Beginning Setting What can you see? Time Place Weather Characters Names Important details Hook Give a hint about the problem	See: Water Time: Midday Place: Lake Weather: Sunny Names:Ben, Josie Skimming Rocks Something sharp In Ben’s foot.
Introduce the problem Tell the topic/ time/ place/ person	Time: Afternoon Place: Lake Person: Ben, Josie Topic: Skimming Rocks
Develop problem Change the time/ place/ person/ topic	Time: Dawn Place: Lake Person: Ben,Josie Topic: Glass up Ben’s foot
Solution How did the character solve the problem?	Josie went to get parents Ben was picked up and dropped off at medic.
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Once on a funky midday at the lake Ben and Josie was skimming rocks over the lake.

There was something underneath his foot. He didn't look underneath his foot until it started to hurt, so he had to go to the medic we he got to the medic that squeeze the glass out of his foot and Ben stared burst in tears. Then Josie said to Ben it is all right my brother she said then Ben stopped crying. The medic put a banega round Ben’s foot then Ben Parents took Ben and Josie home. We Ben and Josie got home they went to bed. The next day Ben and Josie went back to the Lake because Ben and josie day left his phone so they

went back to the lake, Ben was about to get out of the car he put on his sandals on and went to where his dad left his phone. When he got there as soon as he grabbed the phone he saw a figure in the water so he ran as fast as he can and got to the car then he said he saw the loch ness monster and Ben’s Parents started laughing then Josie said did you really see the loch ness monster and Ben said yes so Ben and Josie walked to where Ben saw the loch ness monster when Ben and Josie got to where he saw the monster josie said where did you see the monster? Ben said the monster was in the water he said then josie said are you lying to me Ben no said Ben so Ben and josie walked back to the car when they got to the car there parents said we're going to get something to eat so they went to get something to eat when they were driving Ben and josie saw the monster that Ben said LOOK THE MONSTER AHHHHH then Bens mum and dad saw the monster and they said AHHHHHH. Ben said I think it is getting closer and josie said step on it dad so the dad was going as fast as he can then the monster took a swap and almost hit the car Ben said I’ll call the Police and the MONSTER ate them THE END